South West Asian Poetry

Thanks to Mr. Miller (my Honors Humanities teacher) I at least have a couple poems that actually follow some rules. Although South West Asian poetry is still rather unstructured, it still has a certain style to it. It's purpose is to use different poetic devices to paint a picture. The Ocean and Missouri Storm are poems I wrote as an actual assignment for Mr. Miller. Mountain is one I wrote on my own. You can tell that the ones I turned in are a little more structured than the one I didn't. :) The Ocean is based off of Deception Pass, my family's favorite place to camp. Missouri Storm is about spending the summer with my cousins in Missouri, and a time when we got caught running home in a thunder storm. I thought of Mountain when we were driving along Juanita Drive and it was a clear enough day to see Mt. Rainer.


The Ocean

The pungent smell of saltwater soaks the air
The sound of swishing, crashing impatient waves
Are rolling children dog-piling in playful chaos
Racing toward the shore

Bare feet crush barnacles on rugged rocks
And slip on slimy, soft, lush algae

A smooth rounded horizon
Reveals white wings on water
And like a glass orb
Glistens in sunlight

Missouri Storm

A sweltering hot summer’s day
Clouds gather like a funeral procession
And let down their tears
Earth is cleansed as pelting sheets of drops flood empty streets
Empty but for one bare-footed stranger

Soaked to the bone
Dancing with delight in the drenching downpour
The warm, wet cement is her stage
Bright flashes of lightening her spot-light
Rushing wind and drum-like thunder her music

Mountain

When the sky is clear
And blue birds fly
The sun shines
On the cold, dry ground.

The air is nippy
But I stay warm
In my marshmallow coat
And pleasant thoughts.

I look to a distant horizon
A masterpiece is painted there
A majestic mountain stabbing the sky
Has today, suddenly appeared.

But tomorrow the clouds roll in
Like curtains hiding the horizon stage
Of a white tipped beauty,
The faraway mountain,

Which is never there to stay.